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托福写作常见病句分析(四)

31. I am not good at maths, but English

 

改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

 

32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children’s leisure time?

 

改进: Who is the proper person to plan childrens leisure time?

 

33.It is children who clear about their interests.

 

改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

 

34. I agree the latter idea.

 

改进: I agree with the latter idea.

 

35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

 

改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

 

36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

 

改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

 

37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

 

改进:People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

 

38. No one knows all the things.

 

改进: No one knows everything.

 

39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

 

改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

 

40. Each form ofshavingsfriends has its advantages.

 

改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.(编辑:雨巷)

 

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