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托福写作常见病句分析(二)

11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

  改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

 

  12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

 

  改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

 

  13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

 

  改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

 

  14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

 

  改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.

 

  15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

 

  改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

 

  16. Insgroupsto suit the needs of enteringsintoswork, students must grasp some technical skills.

 

  改进: Insgroupsto meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

 

  17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.

 

  改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

 

  18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

 

  改进: This knowledge will become part of you.

 

  19. They cannot think clearly.

 

  改进: They cannot think straight.

 

  20. Money can improve their living standard.

 

  改进: Money can improve their life. (编辑:雨巷)

 

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