闵同学，毕业于非211大学 ，英语专业，意愿申请英国名校
学生背景：国内非211大学
标准化成绩：GPA84，雅思6.5
申请期望： 英国名校
申请结果：成功申请到英国名校巴斯大学TESOL专业
优 势：国外从事教学的经验，所学专业和申请专业对口
劣势：非211大学，平均分没有达到巴斯大学的硬性要求。按以往经验，巴斯大学需要211大学最低平均分在82分以上。
英国留学顾问分析：
作为专业英国留学顾问在为学生申请英国名校的过程中，结合学生专业及自身的特点准确为学生定位学校是非常重要的一个环节，如果学校定位不准确，所有的努力将功亏一篑。英国的名校除了对学生大四在读的成绩看重之外，学生的综合能力也是英国名校考虑的重点。
从2012年英国名校的录取率来看，与去年同期水平相比，英国名校对学生GPA的要求普遍大幅度提高。巴斯大学倾向于选择211大学的学生，最低的平均分入取标准是82分以上。从闵同学的学术背景情况来看，所毕业的学校及平均分申请巴斯大学没有绝对的优势。但是，学生有在国外从事一年的教学经历，这是申请巴斯大学的亮点。在制作材料过程中，我们抓住这一亮点，重分发掘学生的自身的优势，从多方面来提升学生的背景。在申请材料里，把一个有理想，负责任，品学兼优的闵同学充分展现给学校。通过留学e网专业文案老师材料的缜密制作，最终为学生成功申请到英国巴斯大学，实现了学生的梦想。
TIPS
留学e网从事留学行业十多年，在业界的知名度和国外学校的认可度都是非常高。顾问老师大多有从业七年以前的经验。通过留学e网公司推荐的学生，只要学生各方面都达到学校要求，英国名校肯定会优先考虑录取。学生要想申请名校，就需要提前做专业规划，得到专业老师的指导与正确定位评估，进名校的可能性就会大大增加。
（下附巴斯大学offer信）
王延云 高级留学规划师
电话： 010-58698484-824
Email： ivy.wang@eduwo.com
MSN： yanyun_999@hotmail.com
QQ： 98719470
个人简介：
毕业于黑龙江大学，自2004年开始涉入留学移民咨询服务行业，从事英国，欧洲，美国，加拿大等国的留学及移民服务，对英国、美国及欧洲留学有着丰富的从业经验。先后帮助全国各地不同教育背景，不同家庭背景，不同家庭收入状况的几百名学生顺利拿到理想院校的入学通知书及留学签证，成功为学生申请到英国众多名校：巴斯大学，谢菲而德大学，约克大学，莱期特大学，伦敦城市大学卡斯商学院，利兹大学，匈牙利德不勒森医学院……深受学生及家长的好评。
服务格言：
我对留学咨询工作有着深切的热爱，并坚信高度的责任感与遵守严格的道德标准是我通往事业成功的阶梯。愿用自身的专业所长帮助学生成功走上留学之路!
成功案例：
1、为连续接到三所英国名校拒信的李学生成功申请到英国名校，帮助学生找回自信。
2、为毕业于非211院校平均分79分的学生申请到了英国名校谢尔菲德大学。
3、为就读于211大学，平均分只有76分的学生申请到了英国名校利兹大学。
4、帮助受骗的广州学生重新并成功申请大学及签证，使学生重拾对他人的信任。
offer信如下：
Dear Ms Min
OFFER OF ADMISSION TO POSTGRADUATE STUDY AT THE UNIVERSITY OF BATH
Thank you for your application to study at the University of Bath. I am very pleased to offer you a conditional place in the Department of Education, on the MA Teaching English to Speakers of Other Languages (TESOL) (full-time) programme. It will start on 1 October 2012 and is expected to end on 30 September 2013. We strongly advise all new students to arrive by Monday 24 September at the latest, as induction is an important part of the process of settling in to university life and achieving academic success. The JACS code for this programme of study is X162.
Standard terms and conditions
Please make sure you read and fully understand the standard terms and conditions before you accept the offer. You will find them in 'My Useful Links' box on your Bath Application Tracker.
Your offer is conditional upon the following requirements:
provide the Admissions Office with evidence (a copy or scan) confirming that you have completed and passed your Masters degree.
provide the Admissions Office with evidence (a copy or scan) that you have achieved a standard of English to be at least equivalent to one of the following: Academic IELTS 6.5 (at least 6.0 in each of the four components); TOEFL internet 92 (at least 21 in Writing, 21 in Listening, 22 in Reading, 23 in Speaking). If you would prefer to attend a pre-sessional programme in the University of Bath English Language Centre (www.bath.ac.uk/elc) instead of re-taking your Academic IELTS or TOEFL test, please email english@bath.ac.uk to find out about the most suitable programme for you and how to satisfy our language entry conditions.
We will contact you again to confirm your place once you have met the condition(s) specified above. Please do not wait until you have met the conditions before confirming that you wish to accept the place offered to you.
Documents required for enrolment
This process is carried out after you have arrived at the University. In order to enrol you will be required to present ORIGINAL documents to the Admissions Office (photocopies are not acceptable). Please check 'My Enrolment Requirements' box on your Bath Application Tracker to see which documents you may need to bring (further details of where to present these will be sent to you nearer the time). Please note that any English Language certificate required must be dated within two years of the start date of your programme.
Failure to provide the required documentation will mean that you will be unable to register at the University of Bath.
Fees and finance
Your fees status has been assessed as Overseas. Please contact us immediately if you think this is incorrect.
Fees payable for this programme in the 2012/13 academic year (fees in subsequent years are likely to rise): ￡13000 - Tuition Fee- Full time & Sandwich Courses
Please note that, if your fees are to be paid by a sponsor other than the University or a UK Research Council, you will be required to provide the University with written evidence from your sponsor confirming the amount of money to be paid before you will be able to complete registration.
Replying to your offer
You will be able to indicate whether you wish to accept your place in the 'Track Application Progress' box on your Bath Application Tracker. I look forward to hearing from you soon, and to welcoming you to the university in due course.
Yours sincerely
Dr John Brice
Graduate School Manager (Faculty of Humanities & Social Sciences)
Faculty of Humanities and Social Sciences, Postgraduate Admissions Office, University of Bath
BATH BA2 7AY
Tel: +44 (0) 1225 383037
Enquiries: hss-pgt-offer-enquiry@rt.bath.ac.uk
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